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viernes, 25 de febrero de 2011
all of me
I love theatre. When i am older i want to be an super actress. i want to make some films of fiction because i love fiction and i love too adventure films. i heit roller coaster and i love panda bears.
Excellent Starpau! Could I correct any little mistakes..? Write "I" not "i" as a personal pronoun,"a" not "an" (you know it!!), "act" instead "make", "fiction films", "I love adventure, too", "hate" instead "heit"..jej Godd start in English! Congratulations!
Excellent Starpau!
ResponderEliminarCould I correct any little mistakes..?
Write "I" not "i" as a personal pronoun,"a" not "an" (you know it!!), "act" instead "make", "fiction films", "I love adventure, too", "hate" instead "heit"..jej
Godd start in English!
Congratulations!
Hi Paula.
ResponderEliminarCongratulations! Writing in English is not very easy but you will do it better day by day if you try it harder. keep on doing it, byeeee.